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[Speed Dots 2]

a nice piece, needs work tho

the gameplay is nice, alot of alternation and stuff, but the framerate is awful! make it running at least 24-30 fps. and the falling objects.. i think you should shape them so you'll have to touch the actual shape or texture and not the bounding box of it.
it also needs sound effects, for all the buttons used and animations like moving spike walls ;)

work on it, update it, make it batter and get more score and players ^^

johndoe21888 responds:

Thankyou very much, those are all good points. the objects are shaped that way though, i don't really know what your talking about there. And yea, sound effects would be good. I don't really know how to increase the frame rate though, i've never learnt how.

[Jak 3: Gold Edition]

Reeeaaally Nice1, but needs work.

Heyo. The concept is great. But the graphics suck! all other stuff is okay :) i can help you out with the graphics tho, if you want.
write me if so.

cuo. keep doing great things :)

The-Mercenary responds:

The graphics dont suck because I dont know how to make good graphics. I did it to keep the file size down and to make it be playable. Also, everyone comments on the actual look? Noone even commented on the animation of the character, which is a part of graphics.

[Take to the Streets]

need pause button

hey, its all cool and nice. but you still need a pause button to freeye the whole game :)

gavD responds:

Yeah, a pause button would be cool, but very difficult to implement - I think it would introduce bugs too